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Lot of potential, but it could use some polishing

This is really cool man. You've got some great animation in there. I'm honored you used my song =). But I'm trying to be constructive here when I tell you that you can do better. Those blank spaces should be filled with something, they're probably one of the biggest cons of this animation. You could also shorten the pauses a bit, or include something that can hold the viewer's attention until the pause ends. Maybe instead of it being it a pause, you could make it in slo-mo. I really like it though. You've got great potential man! You just need to take the time to work out those details =)

metaknight135 responds:

Thanks man! part 2 is being made as we speak! and i learned from this movie, make shorter/more interesting pauses,and fill up the blank spaces (which i learned how to make look better now) =)

Great!

This has got a lot of potential, actually. I think all of the characters so far are very original and funny. The jokes are humorous enough, but I bet you can do better. This episode greatly improved upon the previous ones regarding the way the episode was... directed? XD Everything flows much better now. You guys are definitely headed the right way. I think voice acting so far has been amazingly good too! I can't think of anything to complain on, so I'll just give it a 10 =D

jossospro responds:

best review i ever got :)

Dude!

This looks amazing! I'm definitely looking forward to watching the real thing. And definitely not bc you used my song in this trailer... I'm excited about that too XD

But this looks like something that will turn out fantastic!!!

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