Although I do believe the animation needs some polishing, the brief storyline, the message, and above all, the way you convey this message, make for a very powerful and memorable animation! Great work! :)
Although I do believe the animation needs some polishing, the brief storyline, the message, and above all, the way you convey this message, make for a very powerful and memorable animation! Great work! :)
thank you! i love an honest opinion like that =D
Great concept!
Oh man this looks great! And the concept is so original too! I'm definitely looking forward to it!! I'll also provide voices if you wish =D
well we are working on the script, but when it's done i'll let you know
Lot of potential, but it could use some polishing
This is really cool man. You've got some great animation in there. I'm honored you used my song =). But I'm trying to be constructive here when I tell you that you can do better. Those blank spaces should be filled with something, they're probably one of the biggest cons of this animation. You could also shorten the pauses a bit, or include something that can hold the viewer's attention until the pause ends. Maybe instead of it being it a pause, you could make it in slo-mo. I really like it though. You've got great potential man! You just need to take the time to work out those details =)
Thanks man! part 2 is being made as we speak! and i learned from this movie, make shorter/more interesting pauses,and fill up the blank spaces (which i learned how to make look better now) =)
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